when last we saw her
she was an old lady now
rattling around lost and forgotten
a shell of who she first had been
like a pile of yellow feathers she had found once, in the wood
she was ready at long lost
to put her memories to rest
so she stretched out her feathered wings
and disappeared from sight
through a hole in the sky
I like the optimism at the end.....the image of her stretching our her feathered wings and flying on through a hole in the sky "when last we saw her"---beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful ending to a life. If only it were so easy when our time arrives. I'm struck by how lovely this is, and keep rereading. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe delicate imagery becomes bold and meaningful in this wonderful poem - i am glad she found her wings and flew
ReplyDeleteA beautiful way to move forward ... Bastet
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