6 April



once i stuck my fingers

in the waterfalls of time

 I can never forget the way the droplets of water

looked in that light

suspended in the air like tiny diamonds

time is not a barrier

time is not a single unit

it zips back and forth

forming  pleats

i feel your power shining 

in the pockets of light

and because i am not tough

i travel there

and find you in the details

time

Comments

  1. tinajo06/04/2014, 08:35

    Lovely words, make me smile :-)

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  2. 21 Wits06/04/2014, 08:55

    Your detail is like a diamond in a flowing waterfall!

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  3. Gabriella06/04/2014, 08:59

    I like the idea of finding time in the details, especially when the details are diamond-like droplets.

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  4. Mary06/04/2014, 09:00

    Yes, time definitely is not a single unit, but zips back and forth....and also doesn't always pass at the same pace. I love 'the waterfalls of time.'

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  5. Geraldine 06/04/2014, 10:55

    Love your poem. Especially the lines:

    once i stuck my fingers

    in the waterfalls of time

    I can never forget the way the droplets of water

    looked in that light

    I hope you have a great weekend!

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  6. Wendy Bourke06/04/2014, 16:52

    I liked the way this piece ended. I found myself turning the words, over and over. Lovely writing.

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  7. alan170407/04/2014, 13:48

    suspended in the air like tiny diamonds - Loved this poem and excellent line, time drops like diamonds, each second sparkling in the sun. Well done.

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  8. J Cosmo Newbery08/04/2014, 04:11

    Nice. Really nice.

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  9. Anonymous05/06/2015, 22:10

    Your poetry is simply exquisite and bowls me over.

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