11 November
an ordinary morning
humming Julia in the sunny kitchen
with you
an instant of dignity in the morning drill
i wonder where the years have gone
you are the star i use to navigate my visions
yours is the stride i use to measure what we gain
late morning light streams though the window
and I buckle under the grace
humming Julia in the sunny kitchen
with you
What a comfortable feel this poem has about a lasting loving relationship.
ReplyDeletei buckle under the grace...what a cool li ne that...if i was to buckle under something, grace would be it...smiles. it is a beautiful love story...
ReplyDeleteYour words tell a beautiful story. Humming in the kitchen is wonderful. xo
ReplyDeleteyou are the star i use to navigate my visions
ReplyDeleteyours is the stride i use to measure what we gain~ such beautiful lines! Sounds like a wonderful relationship that inspired these words!
beautiful..
ReplyDeleteThis is always beauty to be found in those ordinary mornings....if one looks for it!
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and endearing!
ReplyDeleteI was listening to that song just yesterday. Funny how we can magnify those little moments, almost freezing time so we can notice them more closely.
ReplyDeleteOrdinary, but profound!
ReplyDeletewow!! beautiful!! extra ordinarily...:)
ReplyDeleteSerenity prevails in your poem, found in the repetition of these ordinary mornings shared with someone we love. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteso nicely expressed........'you are the star i use to navigate my visions'..my favorite line
ReplyDeleteA very sweet write. Well-penned. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
extra ordinary!
ReplyDeleteThis is WONDERFUL......what a blessing to have moments like this. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThis could be a romantic relationship or one of a parent and child. It is delightful in its profound simplicity.
ReplyDeletea kind of love that does not barter....lovely visions that last and last....extraordinary in the ordinary light
ReplyDeleteYes a very comforting piece..can feel all those ruminations as 'you' contendly be in the kitchen..
ReplyDeletebeautiful one..
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