Gleaning in fields of grace
ugh..i doesn't - and spreading legs for the master - better get rid of that violet lipstick you know..
Wow, this is a strong statement on the objectification of women in the media. Well done.
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Stabbing choking they must be jokingBy Robert Pollard of guided by voices
This piece gets to the point quickly, and seemingly effortlessly!Night Class in German
oh dang....what a close eh? yikes....we def worship beauty and find incredible ways to achieve it...sad really
That worship is not healthy.. and I also read objectification of women into your words... very good.
Wow, strong piece. You have an amazing way with words.
That was brilliant. I detest adverts with a passion bordering on insanity. Wonderful!
Yes they do. Strong write, it reads almost like an expose'.
What a twist at the end. Nicely done. Great share. :-)
I knew it was headed for a wow ending from the first line...it caught my attention immediately.
A strong and powerful (and unfortunately all too true) statement! Well done!
It takes skill to make something that makes sense from the words in the Whirl. You accomplished it greatly & made a strong point.
The question:does this make me sassy and single? Is really central to the poem. Nice!
Absolutely. And then wonder why kids are acting out sexually younger and younger. Strong and pithy statement.
Ending lines are killer ~ I hate it when people sell themselves brazenly for 30 second commercial ~ Good one ~
TV has no conscience and it hurts everyone it sees.
A great statement made in this piece.
Wonderful whirl with that extra oomph!
Very good one - and clever use of both prompts.Anna :o]
great voice......very timely...
Splendid, and timely indeed.Pamela
Nice work!I think I dated her when she was working on her doctorate in Italian Lit. :-)ZQ
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