12 January



fire

i burn in our song

your flaming licks consume me

daylight smoldering


poetry jam

Comments

  1. 13 words that take me in as many directions-sexy and sweet

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  2. Very sultry poem. Great writing.

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  3. wow, such an intense feeling!

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  4. Passion equates with fire so well...

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  5. I really can identify with "I burn in our song."

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  6. I like very short pieces like this. I like to see lots packed into a few words like this.

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  7. You really made every word count, nicely done! Happy New Year:-)

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