20 October



we dig deep holes in gravel

put up fences

and build our walls up brick by brick

it's a balancing act they tell us

as if we could have noticed everything
as if we could have prepared for tentacles
that climbed our fortresses
and left our eyes and mouths
staring into vacancy

in the end we are nothing 
time cheats us all
and trashes everything







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  1. Victoria20/10/2013, 20:04

    Wonderful, economic use of the Wordle. Great message as well.

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky20/10/2013, 21:27

    Wowzers, you took those words and look what you made of them! Great touch with the eyes and mouths staring into vacancy!

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  3. Brian Miller20/10/2013, 21:35

    time plays no favorites...and will def ravish us all....

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  4. Vandana Sharma21/10/2013, 00:27

    How true one day we all will be mud....reality of life

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  5. Natašek21/10/2013, 01:59

    ha, i like the ending verse... very realistic..time cheats us.

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  6. Old Egg21/10/2013, 05:14

    Ain't that the truth! However I intend to go out fighting.

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  7. Unknown21/10/2013, 05:39

    Your words are very powerful. It is hard to beat Time, but hopefully the days in between make it all worthwhile!

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  8. Lynn21/10/2013, 06:51

    well done, this wasn't an easy looking group of words..

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  9. Kitty 21/10/2013, 07:14

    I love this:

    "as if we could have noticed everything
    as if we could have prepared for tentacles
    that climbed our fortresses
    and left our eyes and mouths
    staring into vacancy"

    It puts me in mind of the media and how it winds around our lives and sucks the sanity from our heads. But that's just my perception. :) So magnificent. I truly enjoyed reading this.

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  10. Gillena Cox21/10/2013, 10:20

    nice write

    much love...

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  11. gautami tripathy21/10/2013, 11:38

    I loved the end lines.....

    balance it out

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  12. chamomile sea21/10/2013, 18:15

    Well said. There is a lot of truth to be found here.

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  13. Sabra Bowers24/10/2013, 06:28

    So much truth in the last stanza. Well done.

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