First Snow
Happy birthday to my beautiful daughter, Bonnie. She brings me so much joy. My first snow day of the year! I work at a Montessori school and we are getting our first big snow storm of the year so.... SNOW DAY!! I made my own hummus last weekend. It was delicious. I added a little bit of turmeric along with the chickpeas, lemon, tahini, and garlic. I plan on eating a more plant based diet this year. It's only been a week and I'm already feeling better. I did eat two slices of mushroom pizza last night and ended up having heartburn so it will be a good long time before I eat dairy again. Each month one of our families brings in a bouquet of flowers. We cut most of the stems off and place them on a tray which we place on the children's table. We place another tray with a very small pitcher and a few very small bud vases. The child fills up the pitcher using water from the bathroom sink, brings it back to the table and pours the water in a bud vase of their choosing. Th
ha. sneaky you. intriguing...def a bare bones verse...i wonder what you started with?
ReplyDeleteReading this makes me want to write something tight like that. Very skillfully done.
ReplyDeleteI think you could cutt this down to one short line ...
ReplyDeleteI think, that for these purposes, you may be right. "I steal in through the gate" does say an awful lot.
Deletenow that is edited down to its essence, yet says enough for us to get the mind going..smiles
ReplyDeleteVery concise and your view words create an aura for the story behind it--a moment.>KB
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteHe, he, he . . . have to wonder about the original.
ReplyDeleteThe imagination runs wild and faster than our feet! Wonderful dear!
ReplyDeletenow that is an edit... hmmm, I wonder what will happen
ReplyDeleteI think the first line is important as it sets the scene far more than just the second line alone. What you are "stealing into" is important for "mood". The brevity here is unique and fun.
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