27 August







in early morning
the gulls kicked up a ruckus 
from the water's edge

rain fell quiet, soft
upon darkened streets outside
reflecting streetlamps

at the earliest hour 
 he laid his hand upon her hip
and she moved toward him

 





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  1. murgen27 August 2013 at 17:02

    Yes I did.

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  2. Brian Miller27 August 2013 at 17:47

    smiles...i love the implied intimacy of those last lines....what a morning eh? i like too how you let us see/hear all that is going on around before you get there...

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  3. Anonymous27 August 2013 at 18:19

    quite & matter-of-fact... in a superbly poetic way - i love it

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  4. Jennifer Wagner27 August 2013 at 18:33

    You set the scene wonderfully. Beautifully expressed.

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  5. ❁27 August 2013 at 18:33

    "at the earliest hour
    he laid his hand upon her hip"

    I love the subtle shift here, the embedded possibilities only hinted at.

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  6. Anonymous27 August 2013 at 20:15

    Tis a gorgeous write.



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  7. flaubert27 August 2013 at 20:34

    Love the addition of the vision of his laying his hand upon her hip. Very nice indeed.

    Pamela

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  8. Todd Alan Kraft27 August 2013 at 22:57

    Very tender, soft, and delicious.

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  9. Unknown28 August 2013 at 02:04

    Wonderful images!

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  10. Anonymous28 August 2013 at 02:25

    I like how the first two stanzas set the scene for the romance evoked in the third. Simplicity is often what works best!

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  11. Marina Sofia28 August 2013 at 02:49

    Simple, quiet and lovely.

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  12. Anonymous28 August 2013 at 04:27

    A beautiful ending. You made me feel all warm and cosy.

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  13. Crafty Green Poet28 August 2013 at 05:07

    nicely minimalistic

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  14. Margaret28 August 2013 at 08:01

    I love the sense of sound - what one hears while wrapped in an intimate moment - the immediacy of this poem ... nicely done!

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  15. Claudia28 August 2013 at 13:13

    smiles...and the rest of the story is left to our fantasy...smiles... i like

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  16. Dorianna (paintswithwords.com28 August 2013 at 15:20

    tender and evocative..

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  17. Anonymous29 August 2013 at 10:21

    present and intimate - gorgeous ~ M

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  18. ayala31 August 2013 at 06:16

    Lovely :)

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